Exode

WALT: Engage our audience with our writing

We’ll be successful if we have:
Used Sensory details
Created a Visual for the reader
NOT used redundant words e.g. green grass
Described ONE overlooked item

We are  making sure that we use describing words so the reader does not get bored. I have chosen a story called Exode.

Chicken Poster

Right now my reading group are reading a book called 'Putting Animals to Work'. It is about animals that work for people and how people look after those animals. In this book it includes 'Training Elephants', which is about good and cruel ways that people train Elephants. 'Battery Hens should be banned' is about people trying to ban battery hens. 'Lights! Camera! Bark!' is about dogs in movies and how they are trained to be in movies. The last one is 'Apes need Rights' which is about people doing medical research on apes and how people want to legally protect them. Hayden and I picked to do a
poster about banning battery hens and why. This is it . . . .



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Here comes the Tsunami - a dangerous situation

WALT: Write descriptively. I've tried to create a picture in the reader's mind using language.

All about me

In this slide, I have done information all about me for people that are new to my blog.