Wednesday, May 24, 2017

The Fern

WALT: Write Poetic Writing

The Fern


In the bush is where I grow where green and brown colours swallow the mush


In the bush I am the size as a ruby ball


which means I’m quite small


In the bush with rough and delicate leaves I shall rip quite easily


In the bush I am a curvy triangle, like the leaves, the flax and sometimes the trees


While I blow in the breeze and the bush talks, Fweesh, shhh, Fwesh
my fury stalk extends, I may not have many jobs,

But I love to represent New Zealand with each leaf I grow


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Thursday, May 18, 2017

Good and Bad Teachers

Recently I have been doing Chapter Chat, Ms Bixby's Last Day, These are my Teachers



Persuasive writing

WALT: Write persuasive reports.

What is the best pet, Horses or dogs?

Both Horses and Dogs can make great pets.  There are bad and good aspects about them.  I will now discuss the pros and cons about them both.

Primarily horses can be a great pet for children and families. They can be great for children because they can be gentle.  Furthermore horses can make great pets because you can ride them around for awhile, you can sometimes trot and canter.  However horses take a lot of caring for though because you have give them, walks, hoof picking, brushing and some others. Also Horses can be very expensive.


Primarily Dogs can also make great family pets. You can take them for swims and walks.  In addition Dogs can be helpful because they can bring stuff to you. You can also play with dogs like fetch. However Dogs have to be trained because otherwise they can pick up bad habits.

I will now remind you of some of the stuff that I have told you, if you are looking for a playful family pet you might want to pick a dog, if you are looking for a calm pet you might want to pick a horse. Because of this I think dogs are better because they are playful and you can take them down to the river or beach for a swim.