Wednesday, March 21, 2018

Here comes the Tsunami - a dangerous situation

WALT: Write descriptively. I've tried to create a picture in the reader's mind using language.





4 comments:

  1. That is amazing jessica , I liked the way you used lots of describing words to make a picture in my head it is funny too amazing job. :)

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  2. Thanks Hayden, I did try to make it strange and funny. Can't wait to check out yours,

    Blog ya later!
    Jess:)

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  3. Greetings Jessica,
    My name is Freeman and I'm from Panmure Bridge School. I have been checking your blog and am amazed. The words you use to describe the character so accurate and can imagine him in my head. He seems like a brave character to try ride a tsunami and is very lucky to survive. Great blog post and I enjoy seeing you update your blog.

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  4. Hi Freeman,
    Thanks for commenting on my story. Can't wait to hear some of yours.

    Blog ya later!

    Jess.

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