Thursday, March 29, 2018

Exode


WALT: Engage our audience with our writing
We’ll be successful if we have:
Used Sensory details
Created a Visual for the reader
NOT used redundant words e.g. green grass
Described ONE overlooked item
We are  making sure that we use describing words so the reader does not get bored. I have chosen a story called Exode.

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3 comments:

  1. AnonymousMarch 29, 2018 at 11:53 AM

    kia ora Jess
    the describing is amazing:) your writing was like that for many years

    your buddy James:)

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  2. FreemanMay 22, 2018 at 10:26 AM

    Hi Jessica,
    My name is Freeman and I'm from Panmure Bridge School. Wow I'm impressed with the amount of powerful words you used. You made it sound realistic and the description was outstanding. Good job and I enjoy seeing you update your blog.

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  3. AnonymousMay 22, 2018 at 6:14 PM

    Hi Freeman,
    Thank you for commenting on my work. I can't wait to check out some of your work.

    Blog you later,

    Jess, :)

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Thanks for your positive, helpful and thoughtful comment.

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