Awesome acrostic poem! I like the way you have chosen and ordered the words so that they tell a story. Even though you haven't used many words, your word choices are effective. Well done! Have you thought about making the first letter of each word in bold or in a different colour? This will help to make the word "safe" stand out and it will make it more clear that this is an acrostic poem.
I remember my first time on a plane travelling from New Zealand to Thailand. It was a 12 hour plane trip! I also felt astonished at how hot Thailand was when we arrived. I was also extremely exhausted from all the flying and was ready for a big sleep once we got to our hotel! Have you traveled for a long time before? What was it like for you?
Great Idea I think I might do that . . . WOW! 12 hours is a long time, I think that if I was you i'd feel really sleepy as well. I have been on a plane quite a few times but I think the longest was going to fiji. We were really surprised at how hot it was but once we got there, we straight away went swimming in the hotels 2 pools. One even had a bridge to go over the pool and a water slide!! Thailand sounds like lots of fun!
Wow that sounds like good fun! I went to Fiji just last year. The resort I stayed out was called "Outrigger" and they had a bridge that went over the pool too. I wonder if we stayed at the same place?
Kia ora Jessica,
ReplyDeleteAwesome acrostic poem! I like the way you have chosen and ordered the words so that they tell a story. Even though you haven't used many words, your word choices are effective. Well done! Have you thought about making the first letter of each word in bold or in a different colour? This will help to make the word "safe" stand out and it will make it more clear that this is an acrostic poem.
I remember my first time on a plane travelling from New Zealand to Thailand. It was a 12 hour plane trip! I also felt astonished at how hot Thailand was when we arrived. I was also extremely exhausted from all the flying and was ready for a big sleep once we got to our hotel! Have you traveled for a long time before? What was it like for you?
Keep up the great blogging!
Noho ora mai,
Emiely :)
Kia Ora Emiely,
ReplyDeleteGreat Idea I think I might do that . . . WOW! 12 hours is a long time, I think that if I was you i'd feel really sleepy as well. I have been on a plane quite a few times but I think the longest was going to fiji. We were really surprised at how hot it was but once we got there, we straight away went swimming in the hotels 2 pools. One even had a bridge to go over the pool and a water slide!!
Thailand sounds like lots of fun!
Blog ya later!
Jessica:)
Kia ora Jess,
DeleteWow that sounds like good fun! I went to Fiji just last year. The resort I stayed out was called "Outrigger" and they had a bridge that went over the pool too. I wonder if we stayed at the same place?
Noho ora mai,
Emiely :)